CK Lynn

thankyouthankyouthankyou. I said Twilight wasn't so great at the lunch tabe the other day, and I swear the whole cafeteria got quiet. This may not be poetry, but it is ...

I like this. Your imagery was good, and not cliched. I know a little about OCD, an this seemed to portray it quite well. The only thing that bugged me ...

This was really, really good. I'm not sure what it was really about, but the imagery and tone was fantastic. It had a really nice flow, everything meshed together well ...

I think this would do better in the lyrics section. It sounds very much like it was meant to be a song. Overall, it was pretty good, unusually and not ...

Very, very true. I personally have teachers who tell us to do thre ditto sheets, then sit quietly, calmly, and in our seat for the next 25 minutes. Staring at ...

This was okay. It was a lot of contradictions. Sometimes it rhymed, sometimes it didn't. Sometimes it seemed to take place in modern times, sometimes it seemed like a world ...

This was pretty good. The imagery was great, very unique and sort of rhyme-y without being cheesy or kindergartenish. But, as Gahks said, there's just too much to take in. ...

This was a good start, but I wish there was more emotion. You seem to be repeating yourself a lot. And also going like this Which makes it really choppy. ...

I agree with carolinewashere. There isn't much emotion to this poem. It's like "my side hurts". Okay...and? It does seem a little impractical. If you're writing about someone who's in ...

I liked this. It wasn't so much screaming "Looky! Looky! Snow!" --as it was a subtle introduction to winter. Very nicely done. THe only thing I have a problem with ...

I really liked the first stanza, but after that it went downhill. First, there were some grammer errors, like that I think "moon lit" is two words, and please, please ...

This was really kinda preachy. There are a lot of cliches. If you used some more original images, then it could be better. Right now you'e not really making anyone ...

'Ello, H. First off, I like this better than the story about the girl who her's ghosts. That was good, but I like the tone off this piece better. It ...

I liked this for the most part; the imagery and expression were very unique. There was a lot of emotion that I could definately sense, but it didn't seem over ...

This was very generic. There isn't much about the narrator, except that he loved some girl and she doesn't love him. You haven't made anyone care, and that's the problem. ...